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Upon the sodden hill she stood
Borderline of all evil and good
Heart confused and lost of way,
Treacherous wind, forcing sway

Tilting her face to the welkin above
Soul extending out to find her dove
Spirit clinging toward all that’s gold
Returning to discover hopes unsold

Dreams flying on soft wings of white
Glittering prosperous and reflecting light
A flower reveals its secret to the world,
Whilst tender trusting memories unfold

Every ripe fruit came with its cost.
The Pain ridden wound of all things lost,
Dawning the time of fate's cold call,
She chanced the norm and braced to fall
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metaphorically, :bow:

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:iconthe-darkest-pink:
can't explain what this poem makes me feel... it's so beautiful. especially "Soul extending out to find her dove" and
"Dreams flying on soft wings of white" .... you really did a good job, I'm impressed. :hug:

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Don't say forever.. "cuz what you thought would always last has passed you by" [nIn] ;)
:iconmidnightrose1001:
wow, im speechless. amazing job!!!

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If there is one thing I've learned from philosophy, it's that I don't know anything but maybe someday, if I'm lucky, I will know even less than I do now. Honestly, it's what I'm hoping for.
:iconsynchrochick007:
thankyou. I was in bed and got an idea, then it snowballed. I was pleased because I hadn't written in a while.

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
:iconsynchrochick007:
thank you, it's all metaphorical... doves meaning peace...

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
:iconizurell66:
OMG!thet was incredible!I'm speechless!and not many things can do that to me:hug:

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~Lord of Grotesque~
:iconthe-darkest-pink:
yeah, I see. I love doves

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Don't say forever.. "cuz what you thought would always last has passed you by" [nIn] ;)
:iconmidnightrose1001:
it turned out awesome

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If there is one thing I've learned from philosophy, it's that I don't know anything but maybe someday, if I'm lucky, I will know even less than I do now. Honestly, it's what I'm hoping for.
:iconsynchrochick007:
lol thanks

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
:iconsynchrochick007:
thankyou so much!

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
:icondestinymanifested:
OMG... this is amazing!!! I'm soo fav'ing this one.

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