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I never... by *synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007:

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I never told you I loved you,
kept hidden the things we shared
I never told you I loved you,
pretended that I never cared
I made believe you were my chaplain
even though nothing ever happened
I never told you I loved you
when I used to hide
you helped me perceive,
made me believe,
opened up deep down inside
I never told you I loved you
never before have I tried,
but I’ve taken too long
and now you’re gone
never to see the tears that I cried
©2008 *synchrochick007
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regret? maybe...I need to stop living in my fantasy world
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*Yakushi--Kabuto:iconYakushi--Kabuto: Apr 30, 2008, 11:40:16 AM
It reminds me of....someone...0.o

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I bide my time, I play the games
While darker blood runs through my veins
I wait the day that I can show
The demon that is Kabuto.
(segment)

if you steal my art, you will be dragged off in the night and dissected, inch by inch, with a rusty scalpel
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: Apr 30, 2008, 11:41:48 AM
:cling: oh the fate of those who choose inaction...

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
~RenderedHelpless:iconRenderedHelpless: Apr 30, 2008, 11:31:52 PM
I think it would be a shame to live anywhere else.

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: May 1, 2008, 11:30:36 AM
lol...it takes away from the beauty of living in this world...no matter how wonderful the other might be

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
~xiangrei:iconxiangrei: May 1, 2008, 6:31:22 PM
*I made believe you were my chaplain* would flow better like *I pretended that you were my chaplain*

Anyway, have a :hug:

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除了上帝，没有上帝

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*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: May 1, 2008, 7:44:26 PM
thank you very much, that was my first phrasing, but I already used the word "pretend" and didn't want to use it again.

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
~sacaba:iconsacaba: May 9, 2008, 3:04:45 AM
:faint:


auch
auch
auch

but awsome
I really like it
heartbreaker*
but awsome...

[sorry the basic english ^^u]

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Hey! visit my new account [link] :thanks:
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: May 13, 2008, 12:12:42 PM
thank you! don't worry about poor English, it's many people's first languages and still not very easy for them. :D

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
~sacaba:iconsacaba: May 13, 2008, 4:11:40 PM
hahahaha!!

so I have to feel better ;)
and welcome :D

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