Times move fast in futility...
what do you have to show for your efforts?
Periods of suffering and misused utility,
learning to hear what blind eyes see--
when mine are inside, inside,
I carry them inside.
rivers carry sediments...
sedimentsthey go, they go,
change plays in short lived strides;
waters ripple, waters flow...
but mine are inside, inside,
I carry them inside.
you wear them pinned to your chest,
displayed in selfish pride.
what do you have to show for your efforts?
When mine are inside, inside,
I carry them inside.
what, to you, are your trinkets?
What power do they hold?
Empty, broken useless,
inside theyre just cold.
Without them you are nothing,
amongst them you will hide.
I dont want them,
I dont need them.
cause mine are inside, inside,
I carry them inside.
















Devious Comments
I'm impressed
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Don't say forever.. "cuz what you thought would always last has passed you by" [nIn]
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Mario Kart Wii FC: 2191-8653-6886
Brawl FC: 4854-7661-2679
Always up for a match
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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...
Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik
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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...
Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik
nop. I can't find anything to be improved. I don't say that it's perfect, but everything is fine in this way and if you changed it maybe it wouldn't be as great on the whole
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Don't say forever.. "cuz what you thought would always last has passed you by" [nIn]
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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...
Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik
And the entire last stanza as a whole. The trinkets. I think that was my favorite part and a good ending.
It's hard to explain how I interpret it (I always have trouble finding the right words). I get it in my mind and understand it, but it's hard to write it down.
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Mario Kart Wii FC: 2191-8653-6886
Brawl FC: 4854-7661-2679
Always up for a match
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Don't say forever.. "cuz what you thought would always last has passed you by" [nIn]
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