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Where fore should I build another web?
It will just collapse come the wind’s next ebb
The small spider will sit in wait for the fly
While watching the bustle of insect life go by

The seasons will come, winter, summer, spring,
Going round in circles, over again it brings
The same hardships and toils of a trivial year
Collecting the debris and sediments for me to clear

Every snowflake is worth its weight in roses
The smell of sweet honey is worth the weight it poses
Treasure each thread of sticky silk fair
Laying them down for the elements bare

An ancient song the weathered wind may sing
But each time it blows something new it brings
The rain will collect and leave little pearls
Dusting the scene in little swirls

The intricate web is made at last
A timeless tapestry of generations past
Eternally the seasons will come
Known to all blessed to some
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*Yakushi--Kabuto:iconYakushi--Kabuto: Dec 16, 2007, 9:28:36 PM
wow...such imagery...I enjoy this...

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I bide my time, I play the games
While darker blood runs through my veins
I wait the day that I can show
The demon that is Kabuto.
(segment)

if you steal my art, you will be dragged off in the night and dissected, inch by inch, with a rusty scalpel
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: Dec 16, 2007, 9:47:31 PM
thanks!
this is the one I said was genuine, the kind I haven't written in a while

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
*Yakushi--Kabuto:iconYakushi--Kabuto: Dec 16, 2007, 10:31:33 PM
ah, I see.

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I bide my time, I play the games
While darker blood runs through my veins
I wait the day that I can show
The demon that is Kabuto.
(segment)

if you steal my art, you will be dragged off in the night and dissected, inch by inch, with a rusty scalpel
~Randaltor:iconRandaltor: Jan 26, 2008, 1:25:52 AM
beautiful. the rhyme sceme works well, web-ebb fly-by, spring-bring. i myself have trouble with setting up patterns like that, it just cant be forced. bravo.
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: Jan 26, 2008, 3:04:00 PM
thank you very much, and you're right it can't be forced, try relaxing your mind :heart:

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
~Randaltor:iconRandaltor: Jan 26, 2008, 3:43:24 PM
heh thank you for the tip, any tricks you use? mine usualy steer my thoughts back into chaos.

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i have a sig?! wait whats a sig?
=WolvenFlames:iconWolvenFlames: Jan 27, 2008, 6:09:13 PM
Aww, you have such beautiful words... :aww: :love: The rhyme scheme is very effective, great job! :glomp:

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I LOVE YOU LIBBIE CHESTERS!!! :love: :aww: :cuddle:
28th May -- the BEST day of my life! :excited: :heart:

Please watch me! =D I'll watch you back! :star:
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: Jan 27, 2008, 9:21:01 PM
thank you so much! :hug:

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
*synchrochick007:iconsynchrochick007: Mar 30, 2008, 8:08:02 PM
focus on the emotion at hand, let the words flow naturally.

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate: